BecomeHuman|CriersWar
The last city burns, Aviva its torch. She thought her clairvoyance would be their salvation but was blind to the synthetic deity manipulating her. To save whats left of a crumbling world she’ll steal God’s throne for herself. #PitMad #OWN #LGBT #POC #SFF #A
BecomeHuman|CriersWar
Conned into becoming an avatar of destruction Aviva ends the Last City beneath the heels of an android revolution. But war has no winners. A virus is her death knell unless she slays the synthetic God who used her from the start. #PitMad #LGBT #POC #SFF #A
BecomeHuman|CriersWar
Clairvoyance hasn't helped Aviva escape disaster. She's left broken hearts, a war, & a virus that's eliminating the last of humanity in her wake. But she might save what’s left of it by taking God’s throne for herself. #PitMad #OWN #LGBT #POC #SFF #A
Daphne, I don't have the experience that the moderators do in evaluating pitches, but I agree that your second one went to the heart of the story most directly. It also enticed me as a potential reader, because I'm curious how the clairvoyant Aviva was conned, even if machine learning could produce the ultimate con-artist. I think Mica's synthesis of your pitches is very effective. Best success to you in #PitMad. And thank you once more for your excellent critique of my pitches.