Please help me figure out this twitter pitch! I'm terrible at them.
Thank you in advance for your assistance :)
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Ren has no time for human sacrifice, until she discovers a moss-like rash—the mark of the next offering. Torn between raising her son & centuries-old tradition, Ren must become a fugitive to prove a radical new theory before she's offered to the planet #mockpit #A #SFY
Thank you all for the feedback (last year, now *cringe*). I'm finally getting this sucker ready, so here's my most current pitch. Just in case I need it for a RevPit teaser.
I can't get into the theory as it's too complicated for submission material and the why for the sacrifice isn't answered until the climax, so that's not really something I can use in a pitch other than stating it's for the planet to have another quarter-century of prosperity--but I am at my wordcount limit with this pitch so I'm not sure how to add that in.
When a moss-like rash appears on Ren, marking her as the next human sacrifice, the single-mother must become a fugitive to prove a radical new theory that the sacrifices for her man-made planet are worthless. If she can't, she'll never see her son grow up #mockpit #A #SFY