Hi there,
I'm participating in #pitdark next week and am new to Twitter pitching. Any insight/advice would be greatly appreciated!
Clair’s been kidnapped.
By goblins.
She has three days to escape before the door to her world closes forever.
Clair’s determined to return home.
But, she soon discovers a tantalizing web of secrets that all seem to revolve around her.
Thank you!
-Corinne
I’d love to see more detail. Web of secrets is pretty generic, and could apply to many books. What secrets? Of corse it revolves around her. She’s the main character. By definition it revolves around her. Can we get a hint Of what she’s up against? What makes your story different from the other 100 pitches I’m going to see that day if I’m an agent?