Thank you for any feedback you can offer . . .
The Edge of Never Been Before: a young woman raised in the magical woods leaves home to seek chances to be heroic in a small-town society. But while she’s distracted by holding down a job and being attracted to both boys and girls, tragedy strikes.
An Eliza Doolittle type story of a young woman raised in the magical woods who leaves home to attempt small-town society. But while she’s in town, tragedy strikes at home. Reeling through grief, she must find her brave self or risk losing one of her own.
The Edge of Never Been Before
Cassidy is determined to keep going further than she’s ever been before. Eventually that takes her away from her wilderness homestead into small-town culture. But when tragedy strikes, she learns that grief is a place to go, too, and there’s no returning home from heartbreak.
All good points above, so I'll be succinct:
#1: Run-of-the-mill sounding setting and goal. Vague inciting incident.
#2: Run-of-the-mill sounding setting. Vague inciting incident and goal.
#3: Trouble seeing the actual plot. Seems to have character arc (wanting to get away, but having to go back and instead escape within heartbreak) and it doesn't highlight the run-of-the-mill stuff as much, so it's the strongest.
My overall thoughts:
don't draw attention to the "farm girl to city girl" trope unless you give it a unique twist (eg off-the-grid, Mennonite upbringing)
focus more on the character arc/main conflict (wanting to be free but being forced back and finding freedom in a new way, etc etc)