The Castle of Lost Time is an adult fantasy novel with 3 POV characters. Here are my pitches:
When Elly's attempt to revive her husband invokes a deadly curse, their castle becomes a trap for unwary guests. Now a rogue teenage girl, a veteran assassin and his royal master must find a way out. The only problem: one of them has to die to save the others. #A #F
A noble brat in a cursed castle. A rogue teenage girl. A prince and an assassin on a murderous quest. The goddess of death will devour them all if one doesn't die to save the others. UPROOTED x WINTERNIGHT #A #F
The obvious problem is that I have too many characters. So in the first pitch, I'm tying to focus on the inciting incident and the stakes. The second is more of an overview - I don't know if it works.
Thanks for reading.