BecomeHuman|CriersWar
The last city burns, Aviva its torch. She thought her clairvoyance would be their salvation but was blind to the synthetic deity manipulating her. To save whats left of a crumbling world she’ll steal God’s throne for herself. #PitMad #OWN #LGBT #POC #SFF #A
BecomeHuman|CriersWar
Conned into becoming an avatar of destruction Aviva ends the Last City beneath the heels of an android revolution. But war has no winners. A virus is her death knell unless she slays the synthetic God who used her from the start. #PitMad #LGBT #POC #SFF #A
BecomeHuman|CriersWar
Clairvoyance hasn't helped Aviva escape disaster. She's left broken hearts, a war, & a virus that's eliminating the last of humanity in her wake. But she might save what’s left of it by taking God’s throne for herself. #PitMad #OWN #LGBT #POC #SFF #A
#1: Is pretty good as is. I'm not sure it's got a super strong concept that's going to draw attention, but I also don't see how to make it better. So let's call it good, not great? I do think in all of these you can delete the title, which is typically omitted, which gives you a few more characters to play with. #2 I think is the strongest. I think it gives the best picture of what's going on in the book...the only issue is that 'Aviva ends the last city beneath the heels' Is a bit confusing. Maybe try to reword for clarity? #3 is a lot like #1, in that it's not bad, but doesn't really tell much about the conflict. We see that she's going to take God's throne...but not what's in her way or what happens if she doesn't. So we've got the goal, but no obstacle or stakes. Just spitballing...could we get one that centers goal/obstacle/stakes? Example: After being tricked into winning an unjust war, Aviva turns on her God. Now she must use her clairvoyance to defeat the <Stuff that's trying to stop her> before a virus wipes humanity out for good.