Hi everyone! I have 3 Twitter pitches that I'd love feedback on for Pitmad. Thank you in advance!
1) SPIRITED AWAY + WICKED FOX
Taiwanese-American Sierra Li is a hulijing, a fox spirit. When her parents fall ill to a pandemic, the only way to cure them is to travel through the Underworld to bury the ashes of her grandmother, a legendary nine-tailed fox #PitMad #MG #Ownvoices
2) SPIRITED AWAY+DRAGONPEARL (RICK RIORDAN PRESENTS)
Bullied for:
Being Asian? Yup
Glasses? Yup
Being suspected for making everyone sick? Yup
Being a fox spirit? Yup
Being sent to the Chinese Underworld to save her parents? Uh-oh
3) SPIRITED AWAY+WICKED FOX
Time is running out for Sierra as she goes through the Chinese Underworld to save her parents & bury the ashes of her grandmother, a legendary nine-tailed fox. As time runs out, she loses her fox powers, her parents, AND her life. #PitMad #MG #Ownvoices
1) This is strongest for me as it covers all the bases, can agree with Jennifer on her points (nixing hulijing, pandemic).
2) Wouldn't recommend this, the points aren't parallel and it looks kitschy.
3) The final line here is strong but the opening lines aren't as engaging as those in #1. I might try a mesh, such as:
Taiwanese-American Sierra Li is a fox spirit. When her parents fall ill, the only way to cure them is to travel through the Underworld to bury the ashes of her grandmother, a legendary nine-tailed fox... before she loses her powers, and her life.
Comps: I don't immediately recognize "Wicked Fox" or "Dragonpearl" so I would just say SPIRITED AWAY+RICK RIORDAN.