Hi everyone! I have 3 Twitter pitches that I'd love feedback on for Pitmad. Thank you in advance!
1) SPIRITED AWAY + WICKED FOX
Taiwanese-American Sierra Li is a hulijing, a fox spirit. When her parents fall ill to a pandemic, the only way to cure them is to travel through the Underworld to bury the ashes of her grandmother, a legendary nine-tailed fox #PitMad #MG #Ownvoices
2) SPIRITED AWAY+DRAGONPEARL (RICK RIORDAN PRESENTS)
Bullied for:
Being Asian? Yup
Glasses? Yup
Being suspected for making everyone sick? Yup
Being a fox spirit? Yup
Being sent to the Chinese Underworld to save her parents? Uh-oh
3) SPIRITED AWAY+WICKED FOX
Time is running out for Sierra as she goes through the Chinese Underworld to save her parents & bury the ashes of her grandmother, a legendary nine-tailed fox. As time runs out, she loses her fox powers, her parents, AND her life. #PitMad #MG #Ownvoices
1 instead of including the name hulijing just say fox spirit. I'd avoid the word pandemic. Clarify the stakes for Sierra. 2 is so out of the normal structure I don't get a clear idea of the stakes. 3 excellent! Love this one! Great job. Hope my thoughts help, but remember, they are just my thoughts so please do what you think is best. Jenn