Hi there,
I'm participating in #pitdark next week and am new to Twitter pitching. Any insight/advice would be greatly appreciated!
Clair’s been kidnapped.
By goblins.
She has three days to escape before the door to her world closes forever.
Clair’s determined to return home.
But, she soon discovers a tantalizing web of secrets that all seem to revolve around her.
Thank you!
-Corinne
I agree with Michael and Mica that it needs a bit more specificity. I don;t think you need the "determined to return home" bit because we can assume she wants to go home. Can you add why the goblins want her? is it for a purpose or just because that's what goblins do?
So maybe "Kidnapped by goblins for her....( add what they want from her) Claire has three days to escape or the door to her world will close forever. But...(add the stakes here. What has she uncovered? Why can't she just run for home, what is making her hesitate?)"
Good luck!!