I'm honestly still new to the whole Twitter thing in general, but I'm trying out a few things.
1) If Lara trusted the Coalition, she’d work for them as a pilot flying the void between the worlds. She’d know what to think when they tell her a captain went rogue + killed the other pilots. But if Lara doesn’t fight with them, the captain might end the worlds.
2) Lara pilots her airship through the void between the worlds, scavenges in ancient ruins for lost artifacts, and always sticks her neck out for her tight-knit crew. Now she has to chase a military renegade through the void to prevent society’s destruction.
3) Lara Kavarin flies her ship through the void between the worlds, seeking lost treasures. Amerlaine Silver wants to unleash the horrors of the void to destroy society. Outmatched, Lara must stop her, or else the worlds will become a living nightmare.
Wait, where did the time go? PitMad's in two days.
I don't quite know how my numbering works, so I'm just continuing the count.
#5 A treasure-seeking pilot takes a job hunting a rogue military captain through the void between the worlds. To succeed she must escape monsters and time loops & infiltrate the enemy base. Failure means those monsters are unleashed on the worlds.
#6 Steampunk meets space opera when the captain of a worlds-traversing airship must battle a military renegade in possession of a device that can unleash the creatures of the void. Time loops, a rebel crew, and the best warship stand in the way of saving the worlds.
[Not convinced about that second sentence...]
#7 Lara Kavarin flies her ship through the void between worlds, seeking lost treasures. Amerlaine Silver wants to loose the horrors of the void to destroy society. Only Lara can stop her, in a chase across the void, through time loops, and into Silver’s base.
I'm not really sure why it never occurred to me to include the time loops before, considering they're interesting and important. Anyway, thank you for all the advice you've given thus far. It's greatly appreciated.