Here's my pitdark pitch - what do you guys think?

Pitch 1

Williams is a Sadeiest – disembodied souls that possess bodies close to death as their Lifetimer descends – a shrinking circle of livable time. Get in the body, free the soul, die in their place. Earn redemption. Die well, die hard. Become Death. #pitmad #PNH #A

Pitch 2

A child’s ability to see how and when everyone will die, awakens. It triggers the arrival of the Apocalypse. Death must protect his Harbinger from the other Horsemen - War, Famine, Mania, Rot, Pestilence and Nature, to learn the high cost of a single life #pitdark #PNH #A

Pitch 3

Death has returned, born from the memories of a teenage girl from Auschwitz, a lone mountaineer, a junkie dying alone in a bandstand and a serial killer. The horsemen Pestilence-War-Mania-Rot-Famine & Nature are coming to kill Deaths harbinger. Join the fight.

#Pitdark #PNH #A

Preferences folks?