Please help me figure out this twitter pitch! I'm terrible at them.
Thank you in advance for your assistance :)
Cas
Ren has no time for human sacrifice, until she discovers a moss-like rash—the mark of the next offering. Torn between raising her son & centuries-old tradition, Ren must become a fugitive to prove a radical new theory before she's offered to the planet #mockpit #A #SFY
When the mark of the next offering, a moss-like rash, appears on Ren's ______, She must choose between raising her son and becoming the next human sacrifice, a centuries-old tradition. The decision is easy, being a fugitive is not. But her radical new theory just might free the planet from _______. #mockpit #A #SFY
I took a swing at it. Hope this helps! There are a couple blanks that need to be filled. What do you think?