Please help me figure out this twitter pitch! I'm terrible at them.
Thank you in advance for your assistance :)
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Ren has no time for human sacrifice, until she discovers a moss-like rash—the mark of the next offering. Torn between raising her son & centuries-old tradition, Ren must become a fugitive to prove a radical new theory before she's offered to the planet #mockpit #A #SFY
I like this...it gives us a good bite and makes the book sound intriguing, at least to me. I think the detail about the rash is what caught my attention first and made me keep reading. I totally understand about some aspects being too much for the pitch =)! But I think this works for me: it caught my attention, kept me reading, and makes me want to read more.