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I hadn't totally refined these ideas yet, but would love the feedback!

My current pitches (for the same book):

•Cruel Prince×ACOTAR

A fae girl w/a human heart. A Seelie queen with a penchant for stealing mortals. And an Unseelie king who will have to give up his throne. Faye will have to unravel the dark legacy her father left behind if she wants to rescue her best friend.

•Cruel Prince × ACOTAR

When El is stolen by the Folk, Faye will have to pass through the veil - a longing she's always had, even knowing how wicked the fae can be. But Faye finds something else there: a dark legacy she'll have to unravel if she wants El back.

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9 Comments

Kelsey Kicklighter

May 21, 2020

Thank you all so much. I decided to create another pitch. Would anyone be willing to take a look?

THE CRUEL PRINCE × ACOTAR

When Faye's best friend is taken by the Fair Folk, the Seelie Queen makes her a bargain: challenge the Goblin King for his throne & she'll give her back. Faye will face the crown's trials and return a queen - or not at all.

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j.d.matthew

Jun 01, 2020

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@Kelsey Kicklighter

I prefer the first one, but great stakes in all. Consider cutting the "veil" thing from the second one, though. It may mean something in the book, but in a pitch to someone unfamiliar with your world, it does more to confuse than entice.

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